Welcome to our Blog!
Ever wanted to try out a new game console before you bought
it, to see if the controller fits perfectly in your hand, the
resolution is better than perfect? Well now you can. At Knight
of Games we want to make sure that you are getting the best of
the best, being able to try out a new game or PC before you
buy it. Knight of Games is a video game center where there are
all of the top games of today and of the past, from the new
NBA 2K17 to the first Super Mario Bro.s game. You can get it
all here. And you wanna know what's even better? We not
only have games, we have everything from cell phones to PCs,
TVs to tablets, and more.
Knight of Games is the top pick for gaming centers. It's not
only a place to buy your fun electronic entertainment, but also
a place to play video games. Bring some friends and battle each
other or co-op on the latest consoles and on the newest games.
We have all three of the next generation consoles already
available to use, including the Xbox One, PlayStation 4, and
the Wii U. Wanna try the even newer consoles? No problem.
We have the Xbox One S and the PlayStation 4 Slim. Wanna go
back a little bit? You got it! We have the older generations consoles too,
including the Wii, Xbox 360, and the PlayStation 1, 2, and 3!
We want what you want. If its the latest console, we got it. A
new cell phone? No problem? Trying to upgrade to a Blu-ray
player? We can help you with that too. We have a huge
selection of TVs, Blu-ray and DVD players, cameras and
camcorders, computers and laptops, tablets, and more. We
want to be convenient for you. We want you to be able
to search through a large array of items to choose from at
great prices. We want to make it fun and convenient for you
at our center. Writing these blogs will help that convenience
and trust to be built and satisfied. We will help give tips on the
latest technology, how to use it, and other tips and tricks.
Knight of Games! Great post, has my interest!! I would just look over spelling and spacing in between some of the letters like perfectlyin and buy instead of but. Love the picture, but I am not sure if you have a background, I think i see a little one peeping out of the bottom of the page but not sure if that is it very nice! just would like to see a little bit more of it! I can tell you have a lot of interest in your business and that makes me reading it also excited so great job! I would maybe change the layout from centered to left to right for easier reading. The only last thing is just rereading it to yourself to see if maybe you can condense the information just a little because you have a lot to take in but over all I would give yours a solid B+!
ReplyDeleteOkay, we've got some writing work to do on this first post.
ReplyDeleteFirst, make the font smaller. A font this large comes across and shouting.
Second, numerous grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. Before you publish your posts, I STRONGLY recommend having Academic Services take a look.
Third, for About Me:
My name is Isaiah McKnight and I am the CEO of Knight of Games gaming center. This is a fake business I am using for a social media marketing course in college. I love technology all together, but gaming, I think, is the best. I own and play many games on a Wii U, but want to explore others. Maybe try out the Xbox. Through this blog, I'm going to share my opinions and want to know what you think about the new games, consoles, and even computers, tablets, and phones.
Fourth, work on being YOU. Type as if you're talking to someone, then go back to work on grammar, punctuation, and spelling.